As I stand alone
In this empty room
I finally take my life back, I finally press resume
That's when I realized
That the passion we shared
The Kisses and hug, love,
were just empty lies
I fell for you
I fell hard to my knees, all your demands I would exceed; gave you all you could want or need
Just so you would love me, please, baby please, love me
Is all my heart could scream, as I watched you leave
Like falling from trees
And floating in the breeze you flew away from me.
Now I finally realize, the truth in all your shameless lies
That your love you did not hide, but to my surprise; was never even there.
Now I stand alone
In this empty room
shatter pieces of my heart I collect
No dush pan, no broom.
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Nice poem!
ReplyDeleteThis is really good. I loved the ending, it did a good job of wrapping up the poem and it was definitely a dynamic ending.
ReplyDeleteThe only thing I might revise is this "That your love you did not hide, but to my surprise; was never even there." I think that the first part of that is a little awkward and could be clarified some.
I loved your poem also, the only thing I would consider revising is changing hug to hugs and taking out the word love. I think it might flow better, and I would also take out the work Is in the line "is all my heart..." good job.
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